Yeah..

[Anthoni]

I don't know. Any tips to improve on this one?

I'm all ears.

 

[mace has a butterfree]

• Move/Change/Get rid of the architects. Not only the size but the font face.
  
• What looks to be a white gradient coming up from the bottom of the piece should be made a little more subtle or it could be removed, play with it.
  
• The splat is okay but its making the whole thing seem flat, I dunno if that's what you're going for..?
  
• I don't understand the black lines on the top and bottom of the piece at all.
  

[Anthoni]

I decided to start over, and this is what I got o.0

 

[Lawson]

different picture!

[`Mo]

Yeah, the stock is wierd. Not a very nice one to work with. 2nd one is a good improvement from what mace has said but it's dull now. Try to add in more effects by using distort and try adding gradient maps, photo filters, other stocks etc.

[Xpnkrockemox]

I decided to start over, and this is what I got o.0

 

This one is sweet.

[Anthoni]

?

[`Pure]

GIVE UP YOU ARE SCUM

[mace has a butterfree]

Eh, that stock is bad.

[Davld]

I thought he was puking into something

[Anthoni]

Eh, that stock is bad.

Yeah, i'm working on a new one right now.

[aTommy]

i like the third one but not a good stock choice

[Celine Dion]

Text doesn't work. Needs some more rendering. It isnt pointing at an exact figure making it boring. Change the stock.

[fkye]

GIVE UP YOU ARE SCUM

[Anthoni]

GIVE UP YOU ARE SCUM

I'm never making graphics for you ever again, Erik. You're SCUM.

[fkye]

GIVE UP YOU ARE SCUM

I'm never making graphics for you ever again, Erik. You're SCUM.

nou